Deadlines for 14th December
D and L
Think about changing the male character from husband to brother and incorporating family albums, films, photographs from their youth etc
G/L/C/M
Keep going with the fine editing and complete Matt's section
F/N/C
Noire feedback is good...check lighting and co-ordinate rest of filming at Niall's house
Jacob
Good feedback on editing and pace..check and improve lip synching
R and K
complete editing of gym sequence in your own time
Think about changing the male character from husband to brother and incorporating family albums, films, photographs from their youth etc
G/L/C/M
Keep going with the fine editing and complete Matt's section
F/N/C
Noire feedback is good...check lighting and co-ordinate rest of filming at Niall's house
Jacob
Good feedback on editing and pace..check and improve lip synching
R and K
complete editing of gym sequence in your own time
DEADLINES FOR DECEMBER 4TH
C/F/N - SHOULD HAVE COMPLETED THE BAR SCENE AFTER FILMING ON FRIDAY - THEY SHOULD THEN HAVE A CLEAR PLAN WHEN THE REMAINDER OF THE SCENES CAN BE FILMED WITH THEIR ACTRESS NEXT WEEK - PROPS, COSTUMES, SETS AGREED AND CONFIRMED
D/L - THE DINER SCENE SHOULD HAVE BEEN DONE LAST WEEK - MOST OF THE REMAINING FOOTAGE SHOULD HAVE BEEN FILMED THIS WEEK SO THAT A ROUGH CUT CAN BE PRESENTED NEXT WEEK BEFORE DECIDING WHETHER RETAKES OR PERFORMANCE FOOTAGE ARE NECESSARY
G/L/C/M - ALL SCENES INVOLVING CAMERON'S CHARACTER SHOULD HAVE BEEN FILMED THIS WEEK (KITCHEN/OFFICE/STATION) MEANING A ROUGH CUT WHICH IS CUT TO THE BEAT CAN BE PRESENTED BEFORE THE REMAINDER OF MATT'S SCENES CAN BE FILMED NEXT WEEK
K/R - THE BOXING SCENES SHOULD HAVE BEEN COMPLETED AND I WILL NEED TO SEE THEM IN AN EDITED VERSION CUT TO THE BEAT OF THE SONG
Jacob: your performance footage looked good - keep working on the rapid editing and we can still add more post production in Final Cut Later. Make sure all of your planning is improved as this is an area you lost marks on last year.
Deadlines for 24/11
Jacob : should have all of his performance footage filmed and edited and have made all relevant changes to his planning as recommended
D and L : should have made all recommended changes to planning and have drafts completed for their printwork and cd cover. All tabs should also be on the site to safeguard against issues with Weebly pages
G/L/M/C : should have put together the carpark section of your film as a completed section cut on the beat. All planning including drafting of cd cover and adverts needs to be completed
C/F/N : all footage barring your actress with effects should be put together as well as all drafting and changes to planning
R/K : your filming is now behind because of Rory's absence so you will need to complete your filming on the gym section and ensure that all planning recommendations have been completed.
D and L : should have made all recommended changes to planning and have drafts completed for their printwork and cd cover. All tabs should also be on the site to safeguard against issues with Weebly pages
G/L/M/C : should have put together the carpark section of your film as a completed section cut on the beat. All planning including drafting of cd cover and adverts needs to be completed
C/F/N : all footage barring your actress with effects should be put together as well as all drafting and changes to planning
R/K : your filming is now behind because of Rory's absence so you will need to complete your filming on the gym section and ensure that all planning recommendations have been completed.
C/M/L/G Feedback
Basic artist research. This is mostly just facts with no consideration of how the artist is represented or their ideologies. No genre research. This needs to be completed by Friday. E
Moodboard has no explanation of key representations/ images/iconography E
CD Covers analysis. Some fair points but you need top proof read this and have more on ideologies and representation. The presentation can then be improved later. Add to this by Friday.
Video analyses : often vague and makes little sense e.g 'the factors that make this video Indie rock are that the video is based on a concept of the lyrics. The lyrics play a defining role on what is happening in the video, the story of the song is told in the video, this is unlike pop videos where the video doesn’t always match the lyrical set. ' Also make sure that each analysis has a strong m/e/c/s focus - Linking Park is the best for this. C/D Improve by Friday.
Inspiration section is extremely disappointing. Again, you've failed to follow instructions. Improve by Friday. E
Audience feedback could be more detailed C/D
Costume section is better but needs images. Rather than powerpoints you'd be better using slideshows.
Shotlist is not laid out properly. Do this again properly. Use the site example. D/E
I like the animatronic storyboard. B
In summary you need to be more thorough, follow instructions more closely and check your work
All work to be rechecked and showing improvement on Friday.
Moodboard has no explanation of key representations/ images/iconography E
CD Covers analysis. Some fair points but you need top proof read this and have more on ideologies and representation. The presentation can then be improved later. Add to this by Friday.
Video analyses : often vague and makes little sense e.g 'the factors that make this video Indie rock are that the video is based on a concept of the lyrics. The lyrics play a defining role on what is happening in the video, the story of the song is told in the video, this is unlike pop videos where the video doesn’t always match the lyrical set. ' Also make sure that each analysis has a strong m/e/c/s focus - Linking Park is the best for this. C/D Improve by Friday.
Inspiration section is extremely disappointing. Again, you've failed to follow instructions. Improve by Friday. E
Audience feedback could be more detailed C/D
Costume section is better but needs images. Rather than powerpoints you'd be better using slideshows.
Shotlist is not laid out properly. Do this again properly. Use the site example. D/E
I like the animatronic storyboard. B
In summary you need to be more thorough, follow instructions more closely and check your work
All work to be rechecked and showing improvement on Friday.
R/K Feedback
Good powerpoint on genre but ensure that there's no cut and paste
Artist research is limited and doesn't include recommended points on the site
Music video analyses all four need to be done
CD cover analyses - Kieran needs to complete his and Rory add that the band are not featured and a point on colour design Complete moodboard and add what you've learned from it.
upload/complete lyrical analysis
add audience feedback video from youtube
shotlist is done
storyboards Kieran to put up
drafts of printwork Kieran to put up
C/N/F Feedback
Some good artist research with good points on their ideologies although I'd suggest you tone down the discussion on ecological issues and focus instead on gender politics which seems more relevant to you. Also you could use some of these images of Lennox with androgynous looks.
The new wave powerpoint is rather brief.
The research on noire has spelling errors (femme fatale) and needs to be indicated why you decided to research noire and I'd also like more on films I discussed with you.
Analysis - good detailed analyses of videos but what's the point of it. You should be picking out key conventions (Goodwin) and also have more on ideologies and representations and conventions that can be seen as links across the range of video along with an explantion of how they have influenced you. There needs to be a much clearer sense of impact.
CD covers - only 3. You need at least four. You should have more Eurythmics covers. Also you need a clear sense of links and you need to proof read.
I like the lighting film. lyrical analysis and moodboard look good (the presentations of the impact section for the moodboard can be improved) but the costume section needs work and detail on intended representations.
Shotlists are good, animated storyboard is ok but would have been better if all shots were noted on each part.
You need to add rough drafts of your printwork.
All to be improved by Friday.
The new wave powerpoint is rather brief.
The research on noire has spelling errors (femme fatale) and needs to be indicated why you decided to research noire and I'd also like more on films I discussed with you.
Analysis - good detailed analyses of videos but what's the point of it. You should be picking out key conventions (Goodwin) and also have more on ideologies and representations and conventions that can be seen as links across the range of video along with an explantion of how they have influenced you. There needs to be a much clearer sense of impact.
CD covers - only 3. You need at least four. You should have more Eurythmics covers. Also you need a clear sense of links and you need to proof read.
I like the lighting film. lyrical analysis and moodboard look good (the presentations of the impact section for the moodboard can be improved) but the costume section needs work and detail on intended representations.
Shotlists are good, animated storyboard is ok but would have been better if all shots were noted on each part.
You need to add rough drafts of your printwork.
All to be improved by Friday.
Jacob Feedback
Genre and artist research : make sure that you have discussed ideology, representation, subculture
video analysis : make sure you apply Goodwin's theory to your videos, move some of the information on representations to the artist research and find more specific insights (m/e/c/s) on the videos and add an impact section (what they've done that you want to do)
cd cover - some really good work here but bring in for SM the focus on working or lower working class environments and mise-en-scene and proof read for minor errors
Moodboard : please add what you have learned from the moodboard and what images/iconography you think may feature on your work
Pitch- put it on the right page then add a small section on what you learned from it
Add storyboards top site and complete shotlists also
video analysis : make sure you apply Goodwin's theory to your videos, move some of the information on representations to the artist research and find more specific insights (m/e/c/s) on the videos and add an impact section (what they've done that you want to do)
cd cover - some really good work here but bring in for SM the focus on working or lower working class environments and mise-en-scene and proof read for minor errors
Moodboard : please add what you have learned from the moodboard and what images/iconography you think may feature on your work
Pitch- put it on the right page then add a small section on what you learned from it
Add storyboards top site and complete shotlists also
L/D Feedback
10/11 artist genre is better but you could still discuss authenticity as a concept. You could still add more on sites/interviews
videos don't show much improvement - remove Lana Del Ray and add another Kings of Leon - use of key terms still weak and still needs proof reading
CD cover analysis is better now but still needs proof reading
In each case (CDs and videos) it needs to be clear how you will be influenced so have an impact section for both.
This is needed for Friday.
videos don't show much improvement - remove Lana Del Ray and add another Kings of Leon - use of key terms still weak and still needs proof reading
CD cover analysis is better now but still needs proof reading
In each case (CDs and videos) it needs to be clear how you will be influenced so have an impact section for both.
This is needed for Friday.
Artist and genre - a reasonable if fairly brief overview of the genre. Analysis/research on the band is disappointingly brief with a few facts but little in depth discussion on ideologies or representations. You should be looking at more sites, interviews etc.
Videos - Some discussion of Goodwin's conventions but this could be more consistent across the analyses. The analyses need to be proof read. Some good points on the less glamorised represntation of the band, other points made seem unconvincing and use of key terms (e.g lighting) is sometimes weak. Lana Del Ray video is really an afterthought. Make clear the impact of this research.
CDs only two features and you need four, preferably Kings of Leon (Mumford and Sons are more folk based). Again there needs to be a clear sense of links between covers which create a clear understanding of the band's ideologies and representations that may influence you.
Colour coded lyrical analysis works well.
Pitch and feedback are completed but you could also add to it with feedback from students at your school in the same style as the video you did last year which worked better.
Storyboards and shotlists look good.
Improvements to be made before Friday's lesson.
Videos - Some discussion of Goodwin's conventions but this could be more consistent across the analyses. The analyses need to be proof read. Some good points on the less glamorised represntation of the band, other points made seem unconvincing and use of key terms (e.g lighting) is sometimes weak. Lana Del Ray video is really an afterthought. Make clear the impact of this research.
CDs only two features and you need four, preferably Kings of Leon (Mumford and Sons are more folk based). Again there needs to be a clear sense of links between covers which create a clear understanding of the band's ideologies and representations that may influence you.
Colour coded lyrical analysis works well.
Pitch and feedback are completed but you could also add to it with feedback from students at your school in the same style as the video you did last year which worked better.
Storyboards and shotlists look good.
Improvements to be made before Friday's lesson.
2015/2016
Cameron/Matt/Gus/Louis
www.jfsletitgo.weebly.com
(videos - late analysis Louis/Gus)
Frank/Chris/Adam/Niall
(videos - Frank late)
www.deathgoat2.weebly.com
Michael C
(genre and artist late/videos late)
www.noodleproductions.weebly.com
Jacob R
www.tiswasmusic.weebly.com
Dannielle/Lucy
(behind on vids- need two more notes)
www.waitformevideo.weebly.com
Rory
(behind with all vid notes)
www.thekrmixtape.weebly.com
Cameron/Matt/Gus/Louis
www.jfsletitgo.weebly.com
(videos - late analysis Louis/Gus)
Frank/Chris/Adam/Niall
(videos - Frank late)
www.deathgoat2.weebly.com
Michael C
(genre and artist late/videos late)
www.noodleproductions.weebly.com
Jacob R
www.tiswasmusic.weebly.com
Dannielle/Lucy
(behind on vids- need two more notes)
www.waitformevideo.weebly.com
Rory
(behind with all vid notes)
www.thekrmixtape.weebly.com